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PostSubject: Trenata Suitsu   Wed May 20, 2009 1:35 am



Name:Trenata Suitsu

Age: 16

Gender: female

Village: hidden in the falls

Ninja Rank:genine

Clan:tooska

Looks: short slinder beutiful but deadly

Personality:nery quiet but very nice to have on ur side in a tight spot

Special Characteristics:Kekkei Genkai when used properly it can paralize the oppnent

Elements: water

Skills/Specialties: genjutsu

Jutsu's:
healers pride:a jutsu used to increase her strength and speed but in return it takes a toll on her body class B jutsu.

healing wave: used to heal herself or someone with her class B jutsu

chakra paralize:with the touch of a single chakra point she can paralize a body part she stop the flow of chakra temporaly classB jutsu

temporary paralissis: with the touch to the back at the base of the spine can temporarly paralize opponent leaving them defenceless class B jutsu also if not used correctly can paralize herself instead shocking her nervouse system into disrepair.

Kekkei Genkai: when used allows me to transform my arms in to sword to slice my parlized enemy to ribbon rank-d jutsu


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history: as a younge girl she was taught medical jutsus through a monistery, when she aged she reseived an annonimouse book telling her of paralizing jutsus in which she traind for years before finanaly mastering, she lost her mother in the last civil war between her people when she was 2 she was raised inside the monistery until she reached the age of 12 when she left the monistery. but their are many draw backs to her jutsu's they hurt her in the process and they all take time to channel the chakra leaving her totally open to any attack.


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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Wed May 20, 2009 2:02 am

im not an admin but im saving them the trouble more jutsu and work on spelling. how is she deadly?
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Wed May 20, 2009 4:02 am

she is deadly for the simple reason that when ur paralized she can have her way with you she can even shut off the flow of chakra so figure that one out
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Wed May 20, 2009 3:46 pm

Give her some sort of appearance or a much better description....If I am going to be raped I at least want to know what the person looks like. "she is deadly for the simple reason that when ur paralized she can have her way with you" Cover your genitals guys.
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Wed May 20, 2009 7:36 pm

Yeah super NO.

She is a Genin and has a one hit kill attack.....that is not happening.
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Wed May 20, 2009 8:37 pm

Well to be fair, Chidori is also a one hit kill technique if used properly...
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Wed May 20, 2009 9:13 pm

If used properly.

This shuts down every Vital organ in your body with one punch.
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Wed May 20, 2009 9:14 pm

Also this character has nothing but B or A ranked jutsu and she is a Genin.

Also she can instantly paralyze you in one hit then instantly kill you.
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Thu May 21, 2009 12:42 am

the thing is it hurts her in the process and it takes a while for her to get to that pont its alot of hand signs dude why the heck you being so difficult
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Thu May 21, 2009 1:10 am

u didnt say that...
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Thu May 21, 2009 2:21 am

srry i changed that i should have put that in there
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Thu May 21, 2009 4:10 am

it doesnt matter, Genin shouldnt really be having A-rank anything, 2-3 B-ranks is cutting it close

Also Tobakado, please don't comment on users if you don't have any kind of Admin or Mod status, i respect that you have good intentions and that your trying to make things easier but ive seen firsthand incidents in which users comment on other users and fights will break out, not only between the users, but with other users defending one of them, or Admin's and Mod's defending one of them, sometimes you end up causing more problems than you aimed to solve, but your help is noted and you are definatly going to be considered for future moderator status
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Thu May 21, 2009 4:13 am

the only a rank jutsu used is one that if not used properly hurt me more then it dose the enemy
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Thu May 21, 2009 4:21 am

I still don't think Genin should be able to have A-Rank abilities
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Thu May 21, 2009 4:24 am

would it be better if i made it a b rank jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Thu May 21, 2009 4:50 am

it would be less powerful at B-Rank, plus you already have a lot of B-Rank
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Thu May 21, 2009 5:14 am

okay i will take it out and put for a lower rank jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Mon May 25, 2009 4:14 pm

Changing the rank and not the power does not make it any less rigged.

Being able to paralyze an opponent while also having a one hit kill move is not going to pass here.

My Sannin, has an ability (Shadow Possesion) can frezze an enemy then he can use his Strongest move.

That is the same incident, except he is a sannin and this is a Genin.
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Tue May 26, 2009 5:20 pm

i took the one hit kill out and replaced it with something else i replaced it with a lower rank jutsu and it is not a one hit kill jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Tue May 26, 2009 9:01 pm

No you didnt it is still there.

Shutting down someones Vitals is a kill.

And being able to paralyze an opponent to make them defenseless seems unfair, you could paralyze them then cut thier throat with a kunai.
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Tue May 26, 2009 10:47 pm

man it is a slow process to get to the point to where she can paralize someone and also i took the shutting down of vital organs out and replaced it with the swords for hands jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Tue May 26, 2009 10:54 pm

Kabuto can paralyze some one with the touch of his palm...Tsunade can completely change some ones nervous system....SO paralyzing people isn't unheard of...It just isn't easy to pull off.
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Wed May 27, 2009 12:16 am

I never said it was, but you have to understand the two you just named are very very powerful ninja.

I just don't think it would be very fair for him to paralyze people with no reprucusion at Genin level.
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Wed May 27, 2009 12:59 am

Oh yeah...I keep coming in here forgetting that he is one...lol...
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PostSubject: Re: Trenata Suitsu   Wed Jun 10, 2009 11:25 pm

hey gmoney listen if yu are more precise on what you hit i will let you have the paralisis jutsu but by precise i mean exact chakra point or no go
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